J-qb's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Be my Valentine!]

Too many balloons!

cute drawing, but I have to second what legolass said.
I think you overdid the grain; Try blurring the grain layer, that takes the edge off it. The shading/highlights on the balloons must have been a lot of work. It shouldnt have been so much work though, considering that the middle balloons should be in the shade of the other balloons. that could have made the bundle of balloons look more like a bundle too.

[Abwout Wiggin Wime]

funneh

Could have had some more work on the shading, and lines could have been a bit cleaner. cool drawing though, like his expression

[Flooding]

Nice clean design

I like the colors on his face, although you could have done more with that. There are quite a few "errors" in this one; the bas of the ears, the box near his shoulder... A good first venture at vectors though. I dont like the way you did the lux, it doesnt really fit imo.

Luxembourg responds:

Damn, I was hoping nobody would notice the box near his shoulder. I don't know how it happened and I didn't know how to fix it, so I kind of just covered it up. As for the base of the ears, that was just a dumb mistake and hopefully not one I'll make in the future.
I wanted to add more blue-greens into the image, as you suggested, but I didn't really know where to put them.
Thanks for the review, qb.

[bunny]

THE SECOND MOST AWESOME BUNNY!

well, you cant beat laserkarls "you never win at tetris" but you came damn close. The first time I read the description I read "this is what I feel like when I have a hangover"... but thats practically the same right ;)
The bunny is just too plain awesome for words, so I wont venture there. I love the setting, although that could have had a bit more work to clarify it a bit; just clean some lines up a bit.
Im not too excited about the exclamation mark... it feels a bit out of place.

Really awesome owrk

[Friday Flood #5]

Awesome

Really great work. I love the patterns on his suit; great lightning/shading in this pic. My main problem is that however I look at this, I cant make out how the bunny is supposed to be riding the bike... Is he like hanging at the side of it? The perspective of the windshield of the bike seems a bit off too, which may increase the confusion about the position of the bunny. Anwyas, great work, great design, just wish itd be a bit bigger.

TurkeyOnAStick responds:

Yeah the bike's the main problem. The bunny was meant to be tipping the bike to pull a corner, but when I went back on the drawing it looked odd. As a result, the bunny looks like it's hanging out the side of the bike, rather than laying on top of it.

... but if I forget my original intentions, I'm ok with it.
Cheers for hosting the Flood, Quibbles.

[The Rabbit and the Heart]

Nice un

This might be the first pixelart flood pic... i dunno. Nice colors in this one.
The shading is a bit odd, especially on the bunny, unless thats supposed to be spots on his fur. Otherwise it looks as if the light is coming from below him.
On the sky; Id suggest flipping the gradient (and spacing it a bit more) since the sun is high; the sky would be lighter at the top. (at night, when the sun is below the horizon; the sky is darker at the top)

EventHorizon responds:

Thanks for the review, you're right about the shadows in fact I've done haphazardly, however I will try to improve :)

[The Artistic Murder of Bacon]

I like the expression on his face.

YOU GUYS DONT HAVE A GOVERNMENT!

[Momma was an Opium Smoker]

GOOOOOSH!

Really fucking great work man. Those bunnies alone would have made a brilliant piece of art, and the rest of the graphic just adds to it. I love how you gave momma rabbit feet. Only problem would be that the front rabbit appears to only have on finger on each hand...? Technically I guess itd be possible to have his fingers hidden beneath his palm or something, but it doesnt really look nactural.