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Cool

nice drawing, quite atmospheric. My fav part is Alduins head. Ridley is a bit hard to make out; I initially didn't see his head and though it was all part of the same dragon. Personally I'd have put ridleys tail and leg above the flames. All in all good work though.

Lintire responds:

Yeah, Ridley's whole composition is a bit iffy. Just kind of happened, you know?

And thanks! I really do plan to get better at making these kinds of paintings.

Got the makings of a good stylized pic...

but it's not quite there yet. It looks a bit rushed to me; I would have liked to see more bold black areas; the hatchin makes this look a bit messy; dunno if that's because of the hatching or just the execution of it (which could be a bit neater).
I like the way you drew the nose and the almost square hand (which doesn't quite seem to be holding the beerbottle).
Like zane I'm no big fan of the sparce coloring.

good idea

I like the idea of this, but it would have been cool if you had incorporated more beer related elements. The thrusters could be beer kegs spraying beer out of the back, maybe you could have incorporated a bottle opener too.
The way you outlined the thruster flames makes them look solid; I'd personally have made it a couple of lines rather than a closed shape so that it's more obvious that it's not a solid.
In such an industrial design; it's important that symetric stuff is actually symetric, which you didn't quite manage in certain areas of this drawing.
I always like your pencildrawn stuff much better than your digital inks; maybe you could try doing some pencil shading too.

Movement

Nice work; I could definitly see this as some advertising for beer brand x. I like how you integrated the thumbnail a couple of times (but you still didn't set it right).
Anyways, really goot movement in this; like some kind of tribal dance or a party or something. The beer orb looks a bit like an orange, maybe if you had made it a little less perfectly round it would have been better. I can't really make out what's happening with the head/face/mask?
I'm looking forward to seeing what awesome stuff you'll make with a tablet ;)

ZaneZansorrow responds:

Lol the portal won't let me re-crop it right. And I'm so psych for that tablet too :D

Nice lighting

Good job on the lighting and reflection in this one although you could probably add some harder transitions, e.g. in the handle.
The bottom of the mug is pretty flat, rounding it a bit more could give it some more depth. You could have given the table cloth more depth if you had blurred the white lines towards the back. The mug seems to be slightly tilted relative to the table too.
All in all good work though, nice rich colors, makes me thirsty!

awesome

some aspects of this r cool.

other aspects r awesome.

the coolness and awesomeness strenghten each other, and overall it's a 9.

Seriously though, awesome work, not to fond of how you drew the shoes, doesn't really seem to fit in with the rest; otherwise great!

Cool

Cool idea. A bit messy in both the linework and the shading which is a shame cause I really like the design.
Personally I would have probably chosen to go with either top or bottom lightning rather than from one side; that could make it a lot more dramatic; especially if you used really bold shading. What shading there is does in general make sense, except that the bunnies fur is awefully flat; His face curves just as much (even more probably) as the helmet, yet it has less shading.

Toast-Tony responds:

Thanks J-qb, i like the design myself so am considering redoing this image, i will take the advice of the lighting, never thought of the way lighting would change the image, making it more dramatic is what i am after. i feel the cheeks are a little too small and the fur doesn't look like fur lol so there is much to attend to in making this image finished. Thank's a lot for the advice dude, good as ever.

DAMN RIGHT THEYRE CUTE!

D`awwwww so cute! A bit of a nonsensical collage with the three of them. All three of them are really well done, but you could have put some work in how you presented em. I like the left one the most, its fur is really well done. I like how you put hints of color in the middle one even though is just black and white.
Also: happy belated birthday!

funny design

but a bit messy in the shading. Like savory Im no big fan of the bg.
Id suggest not using black and white for shading. rather: pick a darker saturated shade of the color; that should look better.

SourCherryJack responds:

that's what I usually do, and did for this (except on the tie) its just a mess due to rush-ed-ness.

The flow is towin precision as a afrotrim - All big letters but it isnt no acronym

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